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Friday, August 11, 2017

Orana wildlife park

On Monday the 7th of August the year 7's and 8's went to Orana Wildlife Park. At Orana there were lots of animals including rhinos, zebras, lions, tigers, Tasmanian devils and geckos. We were mostly looking at endangered animals and talking about what made them endangered. We used H.I.P.P.O which stands for Habitat loss, Introductions, Population growth, Pollution and Overexploitation. It was a lot of fun, there were sooo many things to look at. We started of by eating morning tea then we went down to see the cheaters. After the cheaters we saw the

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  1. Hello Thomas I really like your Orana Wildlife Park writing because You put a lot of puncation and effort into your writing. I like how you used commas in the right place. Maybe next time you could put a full stop at the end of your sentence. Great job!

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    1. Hi Austin,
      Thanks for the kind comment. I may update my blog in the future.
      From Thomas

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