HI Thomas I like how you have added the pic of the guinea and what they need. Could you add more writing to the slide the part i liked is how you keept it short.
Hi Thomas , I like the way how you added the photos of the gunea pig , The same thought as Caleb you should add more stuff in the writing , Keep up the good work thomas
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HI Thomas
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added the pic of the guinea and what they need.
Could you add more writing to the slide
the part i liked is how you keept it short.
Hi Thomas , I like the way how you added the photos of the gunea pig , The same thought as Caleb you should add more stuff in the writing , Keep up the good work thomas
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you added pics of the guinea pig but you could of put the price in there somewhere.
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