At first I felt heavy with my own self esteem weighing me down.
I slowly felt myself lose that weight as people did nasty things around me.
Now I feel empty, alone and hollow like there is nothing left for me.
What was your experience of this activity involving personifying a can of shave gel?
Well at first the can felt heavy and weighted but as people sprayed gel out of the can it began to feel lighter and emptier. I felt as though I was being mean to it and making it feel bad.
What did you learn?
Even the smallest thing can leave a result as big as an ocean. Even if that's not what the teacher wanted me to learn that's what I did learn.
Wednesday, September 12, 2018
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Kia ora Thomas.
ReplyDeleteThese are some beautiful statements. You really did learn what I wanted you to learn and expressed your ideas in an almost poetic way. I like your last bit, "Even the smallest thing can leave a result as big as an ocean." I love this simile.
Well done on this task!
- Miss Birtch