On our way to our year 8 EOTC week we are doing tasks based on the places were going. The first task I did was design a raft, this is the second task. In this task I have to write what part of the EOTC week I'm most looking forward to. Here it is:
This looks like a great beginning to an EOTC week activity! I want you to have a think about what will make it up to Year 8 quality.
I am looking for at least 6-8 sentences for a quality piece of writing. As well, the criteria asks for a photo or video for each post that will really make your blog work standout!
Once you add a little bit more to your writing and include an image, this will be a great post about water activities!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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Hello Thomas!
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a great beginning to an EOTC week activity! I want you to have a think about what will make it up to Year 8 quality.
I am looking for at least 6-8 sentences for a quality piece of writing. As well, the criteria asks for a photo or video for each post that will really make your blog work standout!
Once you add a little bit more to your writing and include an image, this will be a great post about water activities!
- Miss Birtch
Great job on updating your work Thomas, I can tell you worked hard on this.
ReplyDeleteYou can now move onto your third task!