For reading we have to write an alternative end to some text we read:
The next day at school, as Heath was walking down the hall he ran into Robbie leaving the school. Heath walked up to Robbie and asked why he was leaving the school Robbie glared at him, he seemed really mad at heath for something. When Heath asked what was up Robbie replied by pushing him over and standing on his chest. Robbie then answered through gritted teeth, he said “YOU GOT ME STOOD-DOWN” Robbie in his anger kicked him in the chin, Robbie then stomped off. After Robbie had finished leaving Heath regained his feet and walked to class, he felt guilty about getting him stood-down.
Friday, July 27, 2018
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Oh no, Thomas! Your story doesn't have a very happy ending! You continued on with the way Robbie was feeling and acting in the main story, but it looks like he wasn't able to change his ways. I liked your creative writing and how you added in direct quotations from your characters.
ReplyDeleteGood job on completing your first reading assignment for Term 3!
- Miss Birtch