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Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Narrative writing problem continued

On the 30th of October I uploaded a post about the start of the problem to a narrative I've been writing. I have continued and added more to the problem. So here is the continuation:

On the way to the address she almost plummeted multiple times, to calm herself down she muttered nursery rhymes.

When she landed in the city, she thought it looked really pretty. There were massive buildings that reached up high, higher than she would ever fly. As Mimi was walking round the place, she saw a very familiar face.

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