For writing we have been doing a narrative based off a fairy tale. My narrative is based off of 'The Little Train That Could' but instead it is called 'The Little Dragon Who Could'. So far we have decided the characters and their names, the title, the first paragraph and the problem. Here is my problem so far:
It was a letter, the mail Mimi delivered, just wait and you’ll see. She was getting ready to fly away,
“Don’t plummet” Burtie wanted to say. Burtie scared her with his large size, so she plummeted to
everyone’s surprise. Count-Memeasaurus chased falling Mimi down, he caught her just before she hit
the ground. Burtie was scolded by his brother burt, after Mimi said she nearly got hurt. Mimi jumped
off to catch a lift, Mimi caught one giving her height to the point where she thought it was a spirits gift.
On the way to the address she almost plummeted multiple times,
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