Narrative Writing

For the last term and a bit we have been working on narrative writing, we also wrote a personal narrative. A narrative about ourselves here is mine;

A Shopping Disaster

On a Sunday morning I was at the hub with my mum and sister, we were going to EB games. We
were going to buy something for me to use with my devices. Little did we know that they would be
missing and we would be empty handed.

We had walked up to the counter to ask if they had what we wanted. They quickly searched up the
number to see if they had any in stock. They didn’t have it in the end and said they might have
something else.

We moved over to where the “something else” would have been but it wasn’t there. They apologized
and suggested ordering it online. The problem with that is it costs more money. We left EB games
with empty hands and full wallets.

As we walked through the hub to another shop I spoke. I asked, “can we go to South Hornby?”
Mum replied, “no.” I really wanted a stylus, a fancy pen for Nintendoes.

Luckily in the end we just ordered it online at the EB games website. It came a few days later in the
post, I was thrilled! But that's when a disaster happened…